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Esther- Angelina Jolieby ~pwnsome-noob

Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / People / Portraits

Not happy with this one at all. Things look too unrealistic and the model is way too obvious.
_{Although Angelina is my perfect Esther actress}

I'm done with this one. *throws down and walks away*

The step-by-step to this piece is on my sketch blog: [link]

~DASteeltitan Sep 18, 2011

I find the lips to be quite realistic, though a bit disproportional, though I'm sure you noticed this already. Considering the artists mind, you probably already know everything I'm about to say.
While I understand the pose she is holding, her fingers still seem disembodied, like somebody else is reaching for her.
Her eyes are nice, though the eye lashes are... smaller or less of them on her left eye. (From her POV, not ours). The nose is nice, and I personally always hated drawing noses. So bravo on that.
One other itch is, and I'm assuming you have it too is, the chin/jaw structure. Do you not feel comfortable drawing a human chin? Do you feel it has to be cartoon styled, or pointy in a sense?

Just my 2 cents. Hope you know I mean no insult..

~pwnsome-noob Sep 19, 2011 Student Digital Artist

No insult, constructive criticism is always good in my book. They're Angelina Jolie lip, so of course they're disproportionate.

I kind of see what you mean by the fingers, perhaps if the picture wasn't so cropped in it would make more sense. I think the eyelashes on the left eye are less because on the reference picture, the model had very thick eyelashes, and this particular character isn't the type for copious amounts of makeup, so while trying to tone them down, I think I toned them down too much on that one eye. And actually I don't know what you mean by the chin, it looks ok to me. *shrug*
But thank you for the feedback!

~DASteeltitan Sep 25, 2011

In terms of the chin I just mean based on the art of yours I've seen before. You seem to draw most chins in a typically cartoonish/pointy fashion. Since this chin was covered up it seemed to me like you don't feel comfortable drawing chins sometimes?

~pwnsome-noob Sep 25, 2011 Student Digital Artist

Oh, maybe, I don't know. I've been having a bit of trouble with chins lately so I could have subconsciously done that.

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